Writing a story

By : Alif and Ahza

The Red-Haired Girl

Friday,13/12/2012

         A girl was walking home one day.She was making her way home from town after spending the day out with her friends.It wasn't late only about 7.30 but it was quite dark outside.She walked quickly and silently through the streets of the deserted town.She decided to take a shortcut to her home through the woods.She walk through the woods carefully and try to keep quiet.

Suddenly, she came to an abrupt stop seeing a hooded figure. She couldn’t even let out  a scream.The hooded figure came forward getting closer to her.A tear ran down the girl face as she knew what was going to happen.The hooded figure reached out and grabbed the girl and held a knife up to the girl face. 

He cut a long slit down her face .The girl please to her attacker but he wouldn’t listen to her and he told her it was the end.The girl cried and said ‘but i love you daddy' he then cut her throat and she died in his arms. The girl’s father claimed he found her like that and got away with murder.She was buried but her soul was unable to rest so now she is doomed to go through the same day over and over until she revenge.

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A TRUE MYSTERY

Molly was walking home from school one day. It was a bright sunny day and Molly, a tall clever girl from Manchester, was relaxed and she was thinking about the weekend.

Before Molly turned into her street, a cat suddenly appeared in front of her. It was a beautiful black cat.

Molly looked at the cat and read the name on its collar. Yes, it was Toby! The cat that belonged to her when she was six years old. Her old phone number was on the collar.

Suddenly, Molly started to run. She was scared. Toby can't be here! No, because Toby is dead. He died 10 years ago.

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